I really like how the background and lines give a sense of speed and moving forward; capturing action and movement in a drawing or manga page can be difficult, in my opinion. You've handled it well.
The bold colors and lines in the characters' clothes are really nice and solid, and I think that they've added a bit of a comic feel (comic as in humorous) to the art.
I think that Nelliel's face is a bit too large, but that could be just me. The expressions on their faces are very nicely done, though. There's also something about Nel's pointing forward that really attracts me and sticks out of the image.
The bold colors and lines in the characters' clothes are really nice and solid, and I think that they've added a bit of a comic feel (comic as in humorous) to the art.
I think that Nelliel's face is a bit too large, but that could be just me. The expressions on their faces are very nicely done, though. There's also something about Nel's pointing forward that really attracts me and sticks out of the image.
Nice job!
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